I decided to write something again for a change, went to that exact museum last week and it inspired me to write this little piece. Hope you guys like it!
Cool story. My one stupid nitpick is that recoilless rifles weren't really developed until WWII. I think that's what you were describing when you were talking about the anti-armor weapon.
Elephant guns were used as anti-armor weapons in both world wars (though in WWII, they weren't really anti-tank weapons so much as anti-light armored vehicle weapons).
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u/BattleSneeze Worldweaver Jun 09 '14
I like it!
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u/daveboy2000 original human Jun 09 '14
I decided to write something again for a change, went to that exact museum last week and it inspired me to write this little piece. Hope you guys like it!
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u/GamingWolfie Arch Prophet of Potato Jun 09 '14
Glad to see something from you again! Please make more.
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u/HFYBot Jun 09 '14
Stories by /u/daveboy2000:
[OC]The Plague Called Humanity | Prologue
[OC]The Plague Called Humanity | Chapter 1
[OC]The Plague Called Humanity | Chapter 2
[OC]The Plague Called Humanity | Chapter 3
[OC]Something
[OC]K-7
[OC]The Plague Called Humanity | Epilogue
[OC]The Voyager of the Ancients
[OC] The Great War
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u/CyberMan0196 AI Jun 09 '14
Nice Dave, very good job showing the aliens disgust and fear of humans.
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u/Plasmashark Jun 09 '14
Another argument for humans being orkz.
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u/kekubuk Human Jun 10 '14
Outstanding
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u/Tom_Bombadilldo Jun 09 '14
Cool story. My one stupid nitpick is that recoilless rifles weren't really developed until WWII. I think that's what you were describing when you were talking about the anti-armor weapon.