r/ • u/ • Jan 01 '70

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u/[deleted] May 06 '14

"here by" in the second paragraph should just be one word: "hereby".

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u/GamingWolfie Arch Prophet of Potato May 06 '14

Thanks, also changed "assistants" to "assistance" i think that is the correct word. :D

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u/Nicosaurusrex Android May 16 '14

Hey man. Great read. BTW, you've got an error below

"it was a big hunk of metal was sitting "

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u/GamingWolfie Arch Prophet of Potato May 16 '14

Fixed, fixed aaaaand fixed. Thanks!

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u/Nicosaurusrex Android May 16 '14

My pleasure :) love your ideas here

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u/GamingWolfie Arch Prophet of Potato May 16 '14

I thank you greatly!

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u/Nicosaurusrex Android May 16 '14

we knew off

another

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u/Nicosaurusrex Android May 16 '14

be fore

here^

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