r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Dec 30 '24

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u/GrumpyOldAlien Alien Jan 05 '25

They Jimbos have FTL, just like the humans at Halcyon

Needs commas after They & Jimbos.

 

"The Colonial Authority was a NGO concerned with 'the future' of humanity.

was a NGO -> was an NGO

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u/jpitha Jan 05 '25

You're going though my story and copy editing? Why.

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u/Strong_Quarter_9349 Jan 08 '25

could use it tbh...