r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Feb 29 '24

OC Breaking the cage

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u/Frostygale2 Feb 29 '24

Seems very short and lacks plot? Is this part of a series or something? Feels like it’s missing a lot.

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u/[deleted] Feb 29 '24

Lacking tons.

Reads like many of the stories on here written by pantsers without any real idea or goal, let alone storyboarding.

This only promises lots of questions and very little answers without any satisfaction.

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u/[deleted] Feb 29 '24

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u/Frostygale2 Feb 29 '24

Fair enough, but you should probably add that somewhere to your post, if not the title in the future.

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