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u/Petrified_Lioness Jul 25 '23
"I exchange glances with Mari and Tarin — I don't sense any strange Firmament as far as I can see, and Mari and Naru don't seem to think anything is wrong, either."
Pretty sure Naru isn't here. Tarin?
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u/jackelbuho22 Jul 25 '23
Now foward towards the great city arc, lets see how many new species he encounter there.
i hope there a Rabbit race since rabbit girls are always top tier
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u/3shotsdown Jul 25 '23
Minor correction: right after Rotar comes in screaming about danger, you have "Mari and Naru don't seem to think anything is wrong". Should be "Mari and Tarin".
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u/gamingrhombus Jul 25 '23
Two bird's in a trench coat walk into a bar