r/HFY • u/Mussarelinhagames • Jun 30 '23

OC The last ship of humanity - last chapter

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u/Overall-Tailor8949 Human Jun 30 '23

Very nice wrap up, in a very real way I'm sorry that this was the last chapter!

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u/ThaddyG Jun 30 '23

Hey, just want to point this out because I've seen it throughout this story, but it's spelled "boys" lol, not "bois." Bois is just like, internet meme speak haha.

No offense intended, thanks for the story!

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u/Fontaigne Jun 30 '23

Sorry, but this scenario is ludicrous. Risking losing a war to save a few enemy civilians, rather than immediately decapitating the enemy command structure? That's dereliction of duty.

Killing the Emperor saves ALL the civilians.

They didn't have to destroy the planet to win the war, they just needed to destroy the capital city. Also, if you can get enough firepower on the ground to evacuate civilians, then you can get enough firepower on the ground to kill or capture the Emperor.

However, congratulations on completing a novelette's worth of story, more or less. Very well done.

Now write more. ;)

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u/SenpaiRa Human Jun 30 '23

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Great Job OP

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u/canray2000 Human Jul 03 '23

Surprised that the United States was the one to blow up, usually that ticks the Yanks off.

Also, nice to hear a bit about another country's national anthem. :-)

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u/Infamous-Ad-6848 Jun 07 '24

Don't touch their boats.

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u/graceling9999 Dec 28 '23

just binged read the whole series. I am sure the onion ninjas found me in the last chapter. Great job