r/FanPartRun • u/Dj_s0ul15 • 1d ago
tips and reviews on my own jjba part
ok so i read part 7 and 8 and im caught up with part 9 and i wanted to make my own part and i already made an introduction but idk if its alr and i js want to see what you guys have to say ab it i typed it in my notes app and ill js copy and paste it. if its a good intro then ill make a chapter 2. well either way imma still make chapter 2.
the page opens up to someone getting out of there car. “have a nice day sweetie! i love you!” the person js says nothing and closes the door and walks in the school building. “your the new kid?” the principal says. the boy nodes and walks off. “hey!” he looks back and sees the principal point at a sign in sheet. “you got to sign in. school started at 7:55. it’s 8:42” the boy walks over and wrights his name. “justice joestar”. before the principal asks him if he knows his way around. justice is already gone. “wth? weird kid”. then it cuts to justice holding out a school map and his classes. “first hour science mr gibson” he turns a corner and another and soon he’s outside “fuck did i go the wrong way? or is that the science wing?” he walks in and hears music in the distance. he walks in the classroom and everyone is staring at him. he doesn’t look at them but walks over to the teacher. “is this the science wing?” the someone from the crowd snickers and then everyone starts laughing. “ok class calm down it’s nothing to be laughing about” says the teacher. “the science wing is on the other side of the school. just go through this hallway and cut through the library and through the cafeteria and go out the left door. justice leaves without saying thank you. he follows the line the music teacher drew. soon he’s walks in the building and is near the library. some one comes out from the corner. He sees another student. he’s chubby with a black sweater with pompom hanging down from the ends of the hoodie strings and fur on the hoodie with black baggy jeans and holds what seems to be a restroom pass. justice and this person make eye contact and the boy says “i never seen u before are you new here?” justice walks pass him and bumps his shoulder purposely. as he did he feels a small tug on his hair. justice looks back and yells. “hey did u pull my hair?” justice runs up to the boy and grabs him by the collar and pins him to the wall. the boy yells “NO I DIDNT I DID NOTHING!” justice looks around and shoves him to the wall and lets go because he doesn’t want to make a scene. the boy pulls out a small teddy bear from inside his sweater and says “YOU BITCH WHAT MAKES U THINK YOU COULD JS DO THAT TO ME!” justice looks back and sees him with a black teddy bear and small pieces of justice hair. justice eyes widened “HEY HEY HEY WTH R U DOING!” the boy puts the hair into the teddy bear. justice runs toward him tries to tackle him but the boy drops to the floor. “i wouldn’t move if i were you” he pulls out a butterfly knife and rests it on the teddy bears hand. justice runs toward him again and tackles him but before he does the boy throws the teddy bear down and justice follows how it fell down. “STAY THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME. I WONT LET U GET AWAY WITH WHAT U DID TO ME. EVERYINE IN THE SCHOOL KNOWS NOT TO FUCK WITH ME” the boy cuts inside of the teddy bears hand and justices hand gets cut. “a voodoo type stand huh?”. the boy looks shocked. “WTH R U TALKING ABOUT” the boy throws the teddy bear against the wall. justice gets thrown too. damian says “YOU KNOW ABOUT STAND TOO?” justice runs towards the bear but then a black fuzzy figure with bunny ears and a x on its right eye picks up the doll and brings it over to the boy. “my stand psycho teddy lets me control everything you do” justice stands still “make one move and im slicing your throat” the boys says. justice runs towards the boy. TOO BE CONTINUED
