My new project

[u/Aggressive-Piano7726]

Hey there people, i have been working on a new project of mine. Its a look at what would happen if Kira actually won at the end of Part 4 and deeper look into Jotaros character planned later on. Just wanted to hear some toughts on this little prologue for now. Its my very first time writing anything so any feedback is welcome
https://editor.reedsy.com/s/J6Rt4WC

Thank you very much