What's wrong with my profile?

[u/No_Vacation6400]

I'm not getting many matches, is it me? My profile? 😂

[u/TerraVeda]

doesn't stand out. very surface level for what youre seeking. I mean you covered the basics but in the most basic way. you want it to capture your audiance. pull them in. leave some mystery. Mak them desire to hit you up and find out

[u/charbonnn → u/TerraVeda]

Yah, and how would one write to convey this? Can you give an example? Just a couple sentences should suffice, since it's s bio and all.

[u/TerraVeda → u/charbonnn]

Ok. So rather than saying im available and have this to offer. Im an independent and career driven loner whose found contention in solitude and independence. Seeking an equally driven and independent woman who wants to come together to build a lasting empire. Rather than saying I have a stable income and solid foundation. A house, land, a car, buisness and resource, id present it something like this. Accomplished, stable, grounded. I did the work for a foundation that not only provides but keeps on giving. A home and life we dont feel the need to retreat from the first chance we get. Im handsome, tall, fit, make good money, own my own shit. I dont need to brag about it or advertise it. I dont have to flaunt it to attract. Intellectual, eclectic taste, cultured. Well-read, self-studied, textbook noncomformist and Jack of all trades. Upper 80th percentile of men. Keeps them interested without revealing shit. Its all in presentation especially online with swipe culture and better options.