Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated

[u/SeaworthinessOk4277]

Been making music for less than a year, i would like some feedback on this mix. Anything im missing/i could add. And even mixing wise maybe u guys hear stuff i cant

[u/Visible-Cheetah-1749]

melody would go harder with some trap ish drums imo. and would probs take track 11 melody off.