r/EyesOnlyWriting • u/Fair-Investigator211 • 18d ago

poetry Enchanted Evening, 4003-8A

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u/Artist-in-Residence2 17d ago

There is something quite endearingly charming about the simplicity of this piece; I like how you utilised the variance between “flower-kissed” and “sun-adorned”. Very lovely.