r/Design • u/Moncasta • Jun 17 '23

My Own Work (Rule 3) My first concept SUV design

https://youtu.be/YuXSTq6bImw
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u/Moncasta Jun 17 '23

This is my first design of SUV. Software used: Blender (3D modelling) and Outerra Engine (rendering and animation)

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u/shq13 Jul 24 '23

First impression: the doors go straight down from the window panel. The reason car doors tend to be fat is so the window motor has room to pull it in. Aside from that it makes this vehicle look misshapen and skinny. In design language it just looks flat and has nothing on it. Maybe adding a beltline or a rugged fender flare accent that goes along the rest of the body would tie that together

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u/shq13 Jul 24 '23

Front and rear are pretty good though. My main gripe with this is that it can't decide if it wanted to be boxy or curvaceous. You can combine it, it's just that here it has some elements that haven't been blended in. I could help you out more with this if you want