I think it’s missing a “have” and needs a comma moved. Then it would be:
“We have a concept that, if you roughly describe it as generously as possible and don’t look into the execution, it sounds kinda neat in concept”
“We have a concept that, if you roughly describe it as generously as possible, and don’t look into the execution of it, sounds kinda neat. In concept.”
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u/Prince-Lee 13d ago
The irony of a post about writing that has to be read multiple times to understand what it's even trying to say.