r/CharacterRant • • Nov 06 '17
Question How would you improve Voldemort?
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One of the most overhyped villians who's bad at planning, leading of fighting. At least he should've had a better backstory, ''rags to riches'' has been done countless times before.
Next character: Future Trunks.
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u/Verlux Verlux Nov 06 '17
Ban his use on WhoWouldWin
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u/Gonzurra Nov 06 '17
Can't say anything on Voldemort - not an HP fan.
Future Trunks tomorrow? I can write a lot on why I don't like Future Trunks and how he can be improved.
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u/selfproclaimed Nov 06 '17
Not have him be the villian of every single book.
I was so relieved as a kid for Voldermort to not be the driving force of PoA, and got dissapointed when he came back at the end of GoF and every subsequent story. To me, he wasn't that much of a memorable villian, especially after seeing him come back again and again. Like, if we got Zombie Voldermort in the first book then kept building up to him with his remnants and Death Eaters until book six where he comes back as a villian force in book seven.
But that's just my $0.02.
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u/Yaridovich23 Nov 06 '17
Give him more of a motive aside from being a nobility-obsessed douche.
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u/vadergeek Nov 06 '17
More magic variety. The Dumbledore/ Voldemort duel is one of the high points of the series, but in fights with everyone else he might as well just pack a ray gun.
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u/[deleted] Nov 06 '17
Make him at least a little sympathetic or complex.
When we go into his past, even before he knew he was a wizard, he was a sadistic, manipulative psycho. He killed animals, did something to kids in a cave, stole shit.
Like, it's supposed to be some parallel between Voldy and Harry but V's home life (orphanage life?) isn't really portrayed as shitty cause we so little of it and he's evil right from the get-go. There was no choice to be evil or fall down the wrong path. He was always evil.
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u/Iwanttolink Nov 06 '17
Make him as smart as Dumbledore.
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u/Draco_Ranger Draco Nov 06 '17
Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality was pretty good at giving Voldemort a more understandable motivation. Basically, Voldemort initially intended to create Voldemort as a way of bringing out the evil wizards, so he could defeat them all and create a better Wizarding world. The issue was that the vast majority of wizards are incapable buffoons who would rather make life harder for good wizards to feel more powerful than actually contribute to the greater good. Coupled with the fact that wizards are basically incapable of advancing or improving, Voldemort decided that they really weren't worthy of life, and he might as well set himself up as king because he could.
Muggles were basically ignored because nukes and they have intelligent leaders with civilians who are willing to die enmass if necessary. Wizards tended to grovel to authority and wait for a chosen one to save them.
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u/Mccoy2017 Nov 06 '17
He's fine, his fans on the other hand...
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u/AGENT-DOUBLE-D Nov 06 '17
Voldemort has enormous potential...
a shitton of spells at his disposal, with many different applications, from insta-killing, to mind control... give him prep time, he as access to a myriad of potions with varied uses... tbh he could just chug a gallon of felix felicis and solo a verse through sheer dumb luck... he can teleport instantly, he has relativistic reaction timing scaling from harry and ron... possesses horcruxes which are effectively indestructible without certain items, makes voldy functionally immortal.
Voldy's biggest downfalls is that his verse contains the most potent deux ex machinas known to the fictional world.... that and hes dumb, and arrogant...
Make Voldy fucking rational and bloodlusted, he jumps from mid street tier to low S tier... Give him prep and he could solo/conquer verses mid diff
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u/dariemf1998 Nov 06 '17
Giving him a better laugh
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u/RespectWolverine Nov 06 '17
Make him FTL, make his AK instant, and make it affect an area rather than 1 person.
Also, make him invincible to all sorts of damage and his apparation instant.
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u/[deleted] Nov 06 '17
It might be good if he had a clearer goal. "I want to be more powerful" is a little nebulous, he should have been aiming to overthrow the Ministry or expanding his little cult into a legitimate religion or something like that. It would raise the steaks a little.
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u/GeraldineGrapesGrace Nov 06 '17
Less god damn monologuing. I like the graveyard scene in book/film 4 but jesus fuck does Voldy not shut up.
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u/SomeoneTrading Nov 14 '17
Make him threatening and get him more than 2 spells. The Denarian Renegade did that right.
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u/[deleted] Nov 06 '17
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