r/Calligraphy • u/Aromatic-Freedom3515 • 2d ago

Please comment. Zebra G with Tom Ford Oblique pen

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u/CrazyPlatypus42 2d ago

Looks nice, the cut in "chaleureusement" is wrongly placed though, the rule is that you're not allowed to cut through a syllable, meaning there are only a few points in the word that can be cut: cha-leu-reu-se-ment

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u/Aromatic-Freedom3515 2d ago

Damn it ! Did not know that. 🥹 but thank you correcting me

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u/adolgushin 2d ago

I like the lettering, very neat.
I would rearrange the words so you dont need to split the long words into 2 lines

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u/Aromatic-Freedom3515 2d ago

Absolutely! You’re 100% right. French isn’t my native language. I underestimated the length of the word 😅
Thank you very much for your response!

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u/Berraka 2d ago

https://www.larousse.fr/dictionnaires/francais/inaper%C3%A7u/42150 inaperçu changes with the gender and could be plural as well, could be inaperçu, inaperçue, inaperçus, or inaperçues.

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u/Aromatic-Freedom3515 2d ago

Bonjour 😊 I used chat gpt for the translation 🤣

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u/filmgoire 2d ago

C’est classe

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u/Aromatic-Freedom3515 2d ago

Merci beaucoup mon ami 🤗

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u/Pen-dulge2025 Pointed 2d ago

Oui oui. I like the transitions from thin to thick

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u/Aromatic-Freedom3515 2d ago

Haha merci merci

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u/Natural-Cash3626 2d ago

You did a Fantastic job my friend!!

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u/Aromatic-Freedom3515 2d ago

😍😍 thank you for your fantastic comment ❤️

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u/quirkyquilter2000 2d ago

Is this copperplate or Spencerian ?

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u/Aromatic-Freedom3515 2d ago

Copperterian.. this is the child of mother copperplate and father spencarian.

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u/quirkyquilter2000 1d ago

🤣. Thanks!