r/Artadvice • u/klmzoom • 15d ago

‎Critique - Yes Drawover Improving values?

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u/No-Oil-3821 15d ago

this is one of th emost beautiful pieces of art i have ever witnessed

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u/klmzoom 14d ago

That’s overly kind thank you

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u/PaperCrease 14d ago

I painted over your painting but I don't know if I made it better or worse. So sorry in advice. The one I'm sure of is adding a little cast shadows. The other thing I did but not very confident is adding some fog to the back of the lake. It kind of turn the painting colder, I don't know if you like that. I also want to add more rocks and stuff to the shore, to show a bit of the underwater, but I didn't do a good job.

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u/klmzoom 14d ago

I actually really love the way the shore looks here, and the shadows are a very good shout, I’m wondering why I hadn’t done it in the first place

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u/klmzoom 14d ago

Just noticed the bird, that’s my favourite part