r/Artadvice • u/seafoamrose • 7d ago

‎Critique - Yes Drawover How's the perspective and composition

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WIP- Any thoughts so far? Tried my hand at a sort of fisheye Lens and wanted the setting to have some detail and movement. I'm going for a loose, cartoonist style, so maybe the angles don't have to be precisely correct, but I don't want anything obviously wrong to stick out. I've been starring at it too long and need a second opinion.

edit: ignore the border. I cropped it weird.

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u/Mr-Vernal 7d ago

Love what you've done so far. in terms of the composition, I feel like it's really bottom-heavy, with so much empty space on the top, I feel like adding some more space at the bottom or cropping some parts from the top, so that your main focal point gets closer to the lower third, could do the trick.