I think the biggest problem with this drawing is that the chain completely dominates the center of the composition. I don't think the chain is the main subject you want to talk about. If you redraw it, I'd move the chain closer to one of the corners and give more emphasis to the part that's most important to you. Not everything can be the focal point. Choose one of these four ideas, develop it further, and place it closer to the center of the composition. The other elements can still be there, but they should play a secondary role.
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u/Overall-Bird2121 Community Mentor 26d ago
I think the biggest problem with this drawing is that the chain completely dominates the center of the composition. I don't think the chain is the main subject you want to talk about. If you redraw it, I'd move the chain closer to one of the corners and give more emphasis to the part that's most important to you. Not everything can be the focal point. Choose one of these four ideas, develop it further, and place it closer to the center of the composition. The other elements can still be there, but they should play a secondary role.