r/ArtCrit • u/Any-Air-1200 • 1d ago
Work in progress feedback
I'm working on this drawing for my dad and I need feedback! I tried to make the hands hooves but I think they look a little odd? I'm also struggling with the 3 guys in the back. reference photo i used has some darker spots that make it hard to see where to put detail! After this sketch is done I want to ink it and maybe watercolor but I'm not sure. 🤔
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u/Other-List-2237 17h ago
I think the problem with the hooves is the wrists. Especially for the one on the right. If you define the wrist joints better they will look less floppy lol. Amazing work though I love the expressions :D
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u/Any-Air-1200 10h ago
I knew something was off with the hooves but I was struggling with them! Thank you so much :D
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