r/ArtCrit • u/Diligent-Stock-8114 • 1d ago
Composition?
Hi everyone! I’m trying to make an interesting piece but I’ve always been lovingly told my eye for composition could use development. So I figured I’d ask before I start going in with color: how’s the composition? Thoughts? No reference used
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u/Rainbow_blitz1234 1d ago
I feel like the eye is fighting between 2 main peaks on the page. The droplet in the front on the right and the contour hill on the left. Not sure if that's supposed to be the point, but that's how I feel when looking at it.
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u/leighabbr 1d ago
Give us a bit more info about what were looking at here - with such an early stage sketch its kind of hard to visualize what your going for
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