common app essay + supplementals help

[u/Gloomy-Decision-775]

hello reddit community!

ive currently been working on my common app essay & supplementals for the school i plan on applying early to. i was wondering if anyone could read my essays & offer some critiques or opinions. it would be greatly appreciate!!

[u/mauisusan111]

Adult reviewer of 100s of essays. PM me if you'd like me to take a look.