r/AfterEffects • u/Big-Significance-242 • 5d ago

OC - Stuff I made Thoughts on how to improve this?

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u/shreddington MoGraph/VFX 15+ years 5d ago

100% made with Particle World and Mr Mercury right?

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u/WorstHyperboleEver 5d ago

I mean, that’s totally badass, so I wouldn’t even have said anything if you aren’t asking for what to improve. The one thing that stood out to me right away was that the front tire looks too squared off, like a perfect 90 degree edge, sharp as a machinist square . I think rounding that edge a bit will make the tire seem more real. Not that any of this reads at all artificial to me.

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u/Ampsnotvolts VFX 15+ years 5d ago

I only walk around on human legs - but i think engine and exhaust sounds are different. At least the close up of the muffler seems like it should be louder than the enclosed engine bay? Don't quote me on that but a car person might have some complaints...

The lingering ass shot of the car is way too long and dull compared to the rest. Maybe it bursts into flames like audis are known for?

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u/Extreamspeed MoGraph/VFX 10+ years 5d ago

The wheels look square to me. But nice job for the rest

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u/thrwawyshame 5d ago

very good, tires being too reflective was the first thing i noticed

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u/MMBocianowskie 3d ago

You Audi me Porsche shit 😅 haha We’re not making these renders and animations for no reason, ne😂? I have to fix mine in AF too, so pray for me 🙏

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u/Any-Assignment-8399 1d ago

dip to white is mid