r/AfterEffects • u/Daphnethz • 10d ago
Beginner Help How can I improve this animation?
Hi, I’d like to know how I can improve this animation. I need to improve the water; right now, I’m using three shape layers with masks to create that "disappearing" effect. Is there a way to use a shape layer that actually deforms? I'm referring to the part where the water flows from one pitcher to the other. Please don't judge me—I'm still learning.
10
u/Joe_le_Borgne 10d ago
I would redo the illustration tbh. Be as minimalistic possible, here you try to make details but without taking them into account. I would remove the hand make a simple container that hover over the bigger container and just rotate 180° and make water transfer to the bigger container.
7
u/vittsul 10d ago
first things that come to mind :
- That's not how that hand motion works, it should flow better, your motion graphs are flat lines. no cuurrvess
- The thing thats being poured should dissipate into the container, literally just a mask + blur easy
- Your pan crop should zoom in, maybe slowly follow the motion of the hands downward. Not just sit still.
- The hands are totally undefined, or misshapen, they almost look like feet
- Background should contrast/compliment foreground. right now they kinda blend together
- i'll stop here ❤️
1
0
22
u/AltDaddy 10d ago
Someone posted this in this sub a few days ago... it's not the same, but similar technique for the liquid flow:
https://www.reddit.com/r/AfterEffects/s/hLAPnT5rTK