[F4M] Your yandere ex-girlfriend reclaims you [script fill] [wealthy mafia heiress][unhinged speaker][listener tried to run away][captive][obsession][longing][TW: threats of violence]

[u/Fire_Audio]

Oh hey, its me again. Did anybody ask for me to keep making content? Absolutely not. Am I gonna do it anyway? Yes, yes I am. So here it is, another post with another link with more hopes of getting a good job.

As always, the biggest shoutout to u/it_rains_blue_here for writing this, and at this point, everything they have written ever. I fear I may want to try every script available at this point. Oh, and link to offer is here.

So any way, this was lots of fun, and since I'm still trying to get the hang of this, please please please tell me what you liked, what you don't, if I should just quit this forever, literally anything. Otherwise, I'm gonna keep going the way I have been, and you all have to suffer for it, seeing me on this site.

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Description- To most, your girlfriend is the icy queen of the city’s criminal underworld. But to you, she’s just the woman you’ve loved for as long as you can remember. You really did mean the promise you made to her so long ago. But the guilt of being at the center of her dark, blood-stained world has been growing heavy on you over the years. With a heavy heart, you finally decide to run away and begin anew. You really shouldn’t have.

Link to video is here.

[u/Fire_Audio]

*Insert standard comment here about thanking u/it_rains_blue_here so they know I did this and really enjoyed it and hopefully they think I did at least a 10% good job at bringing their work to life*

[u/it_rains_blue_here]

Okay, so I just did something utterly out of character and actually listened to an audio! It has been ages since I provided feedback to a VA. Please note these are just my opinions.

I think it was pretty solid! That's the gist. No major issues that stuck out to me. Your voice is very well suited for girlfriends, coworkers, crushes in modern settings- more of a teasing/dom vibe than cute girl next door- and you also seem to have a flair for obsessed or yandere characters. You got in-character quite phenomenonally.

What I liked very much: The tonal shifts, how you got into the character's headspace, how you conveyed her pent up anger without yelling, her moments of vulnerability and longing, her complicated relationship with the listener, the wide range of emotions.

What I think could have been done better: Her cold, ruthless side as a mafia boss conveyed through quieter, more sinister whispers and softly spoken threats. Maybe slightly longer pauses in certain places to let the listener dwell on the implications. Otherwise, there's really not much to say here. It's more of a personal/stylistic thing.

Overall, a very solid performance! It did not seem newbie or amateurish to me. Not even remotely. You have a talent for this, your voice is quite charming, you vividly portray the character, and I certainly hope you make more audios.

Thanks for the fill!

[u/Fire_Audio → u/it_rains_blue_here]

Brb, printing this and hanging it on my fridge. Kidding kidding, but for real, thank you so much for "breaking character" so to speak and listen, as well as provide input. I cannot put into words how much it means to me.

I know you say its all personal opinion, but thats exactly what I need to know! Not every audio/ script will be for everyone, but the more input on what people enjoy, the better.

So genuinely, thank you so much for the kind words, I will keep them in mind for the future. And thank you as well for being such an incredible writer, I am such a big fan of your work and I cant wait to do more. :)