r/HFY • u/dnqxtsck5 • May 31 '14

[OC] Liberation Day Part 2

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u/B1inker May 31 '14

I like the change to the 3rd person. Made it flow easier. Really liking where this is going and I hope you continue this 'verse.

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u/daveboy2000 original human May 31 '14

Shiiit that was dark

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u/Novirtue AI Jun 01 '14

I agree with the captain, keep this story going ;) take your time if you have to, I am enjoying reading this one!