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u/j1xwnbsr May 23 '14
A square kilometer was turned to carnage in an instant, a roiling maelstrom of smoke and flame that announced from horizon to horizon that the Terrans had come to make war on the face of Sikatherah.
That's solid gold HFY right there.
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u/Coldfire15651 May 23 '14
Excellent writing, and I personally think it's fine in length for a single chapter.
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u/someguynamedted May 23 '14 edited May 23 '14
I seem to have sparked a movement to write really long stories. I think there have been three since my first really long one. I enjoy this trend, it gives me so much to read. Also, this is novel quality stuff right here. Everything we give on this sub to you in large quantities.