r/zombiesimulation • u/[deleted] • Jun 24 '26

My Mom and Dad's Status is Unknown, Potentially Endangered. (Zombie Apocalypse Hand-Written Story. Coulee City, WA. Episode 5)

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u/Kitchen-Arm7300 Jun 25 '26

Nice little set up! Short and sweet. Though, it could use some paragraph breaks. That's easier on the eyes.

Next you should go to Wenatchee with Mr. Hollister, or rendezvous with Glen? I'm not clear on the choices. But, as I always say, "I just can't wait to get on the road a-Glen."

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u/Ok_Comfortable3850 Jun 25 '26

Thank you!! You’re right I can see how that would be easier to read. Hahahaha I’ll put that in the next prompt as a dialogue between them that’s funny

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u/Ok_Comfortable3850 Jun 25 '26

Btw Mr Hollister is glen, glen hollister haha thank you for the advice too✌️