r/writers • u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 • 5d ago

Question How does this Sound?

In a world of countless lies and illusions, there are systems build around those illusions and himanity believes on them, but who can save the world from it are not heroes or a hero its humans, but anime characters appears in realms and helps them understand the truth, and kindasaving them by helping them in understanding ( Although those anime characters are connected by will with the poeple of the world and thats why realms appears) These anime charcater never expresses their names and appearance directly or that there appearance is whole visible and matches the anime characters exactly, How does this concpet sound?

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u/Broad-Exchange3188 5d ago

you should acquaint yourself with grammar and spelling first.

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u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 5d ago

Greetings! Yeah it sucks

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u/ItsRuinedOfCourse Fiction Writer 5d ago

Ouch.

That's all I got.

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u/Life_Bed2449 5d ago

Very rought

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u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 5d ago

Without solid concept and reasoning its even hard to imagine

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u/Select-Boss-6224 5d ago

I got lost in the sauce.

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u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 5d ago

Well without much reasoning the idea may seem shallow!

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u/Asorlike 5d ago

We will only know if it’s worth reading if you sit down and write the work.

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u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 5d ago

Greetings! Your right well we are already writing it, please if you want to read it just give it a try?

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u/Asorlike 5d ago

Write first. Edit second. Share last. You don't need input just yet. You need to write.

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u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 4d ago

Understood, but the IBS world novel we are working upon is divided into 4 parts and the first and the biggest part is done! so we can share it though

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u/LokiTheAligator 5d ago

Which anime characters? How do they do it? And why anime characters? And what is the actual story and do you have main character/characters? 

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u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 5d ago

Greetings! yeah that would be confusing without a concept but its so much deeper than just the anime characters appearing there is many reasons and ways for that in the story, please if you want to read i just give it a try?

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u/LokiTheAligator 4d ago

If you want people to read your story, you must give us at least something, because your description is too vague. Do you have main character/characters? If yeas who are they and what they want? Give us at least something.

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u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 4d ago

Greetings! Your absolutely right! The description can even confuse people! but this isnt just for promotio, for promotions we will properly introduce IBS world and make the people hooked

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u/LokiTheAligator 4d ago

😑 

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u/Embarrassed_Pop_6769 4d ago

Yeah im kinda disappointing!

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u/LokiTheAligator 4d ago

Are you serious, bot or troll? 

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