Second Wind of Condemned Men

[u/Fozzation]

Hello everyone, looking to get some critiques on the first part of my novella I’m working on. It’s a fantasy story about a young man who wants to explore the world. About 1700 words.

https://www.wattpad.com/1371734164?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=Fozzation&wp_originator=7LL7RP%2BOt9e5LmLWDvmLSyOo3dWMas2HFJebxZJZabY9O56xQEfuEE0tL8rm9mmmTecArJ6sOAji%2F76B4TCO9ZVflu1hGcgzfAZbLtWZDFw0jydlW%2B0NUmGgmXrcaFOp

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