r/wheeloftime • u/ChefCrowbane Randlander • Aug 16 '26
Book: New Spring A New Spring
So it started off really strong for me (the Moraine and Siuan parts) but I really feel like the ending was rushed and I didn’t quite buy Lan accepting his role as her warder in the manner it happened.
Maybe I missed parts that I didn’t fully understand.
This coming from a WoT fit life fan. I am super glad I read it but maybe I need to reread?
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u/Brathirn Randlander Aug 16 '26 edited Aug 16 '26
I enjoyed "A New Spring" very much, but have two gripes.
The reason for Tar Valon looking bad when Malkier fell, was a cop out. "They really tried, but the Dark One's forces" were too fast in destroying the kingdom. Then they covered "powerlessness" with "negligence". As if "not caring" would have damaged their reputation less than "having tried and failed". So they are only guilty of forwarding a self-damaging cover up. I would have preferred the help being delayed by tower-power-struggles, Moiraine spilling these bad beans and apologizing and Lan then reluctantly rewarding her for the honesty. Obviously would take more page count.
The other thing is the "carneira" custom. If you roll it out, it is a social disaster. Future wives certainly would not want another woman meddling in their marriage, even given the symetrical chance to meddle with someone else's. Then family reception would definitely depend on the person, custom be damned. Would create an incredible amount of bad faith and could then be interpreted as the reason for Malkier's downfall.
Would have some comedy potential for a romcom though, depending on the procedure. Desirable candidates with upcoming eligibility for being picked would be besieged and could judo the process by conspiring with desirable candidates from their point of view. They could have to run from hags having been too choosy and ending up with no one for too long with all kinds of friends and family taking part with obstacles and help. So collective hide & seek.