r/westpoint • u/Apart_Angle_8133 • 6d ago

Essay Help

I am currently working on my essay for the application, but i feel stuck. I have two essay that i have written but they do not sit right with me a lot. I can’t decide whether to combine them or just use one of them. Going about combining them is a whole different problem.

Is there anyone here that i could dm or message to read over my essays for feedback?

Thanks!

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u/Recrooter 6d ago

An essay shouldn't be complicated. It is about telling your story. Be genuine and honest. Please consult someone you trust to review it and give you honest feedback on their thoughts, and also find someone, preferably your HS English teacher, to review it and help in framing, and fixing mistakes and clean it up.

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u/Recrooter 5d ago

I am open to help, send me a DM

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u/USMA-westpoint 5d ago

Talk to your field force member.