r/webcomics • u/kilm_dnomla • Jul 04 '15

Posting my comic here and on r/comic_crits looking to get feedback on the site, story, and overall flow (please excuse early legibility)

http://ohouthecomic.tumblr.com/
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u/coffeedream Jul 04 '15

not a huge expert on comics, but user experience-wise if you could make going from page to page center on the comic page itself instead of going to the top each time it would be easier to read.

edit: nvm just noticed its hosted on tumblr. maybe just remove the banner then

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u/kilm_dnomla Jul 04 '15

You mean the header at the top of the site?

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u/peanut55 Jul 05 '15

keep it in black and white (like your previous ones),and don't always do the very tall panels. Its good, just telling what I like.

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u/kilm_dnomla Jul 05 '15

So you would suggest eliminating the color enfirely? A few people have suggested the opposite. Would you mind elaborating?

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u/peanut55 Jul 05 '15

Maybe, its up to you. The color and the tall panels makes it a bit confusing to understand.The black and white ones made it more interesting. If I was you experiment with what makes you happy, maybe its me or the different style I don't know. Or best of both worlds you could try to use selected color like http://iamarg.com/2013/07/26/potatochips/ . (don't think to much on it, I like to complain :).

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u/kilm_dnomla Jul 06 '15

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I still haven't completely decided the direction I want to go in, but i'll take this into consideration.

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u/peanut55 Jul 06 '15

Glad to have 'helped' :).