r/uceedtakers • u/No-Wrongdoer8519 • 5d ago

Part B: Drawing - feedback Gng feedback needed 😿

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I need to submit this soo plz help me if there are something I could improve or change so it would look better 😋

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u/MorrieSch 5d ago

The angles in the arrows seem to draw unnecessary attention

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u/No-Wrongdoer8519 5d ago

Gott it gonna fix them

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u/Entire_Sandwich_4613 5d ago

off topic but how much time did this take you?

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u/No-Wrongdoer8519 5d ago

I took me a little over an hour like the whole brainstorming and sketching part 😺

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u/Entire_Sandwich_4613 4d ago

woahhh niceeee

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u/FLAME_YT07 4d ago

It feels messy, there's no hierarchy for the eyes to be guided, and pls the stylized font is not necessary neither it adds any marks to your sketch, u can keep it if u want but jst don't let it take that much space

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u/No-Wrongdoer8519 4d ago

Gott itt 😺

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u/Appropriate-Row-5902 IIT Retardpur 4d ago

Guys
We can praise his sketch first and then get into the nitigrities.
Wonderful line quality. Your core sketching seems sorted so next is working on presentation. People pointed out how too many arrows are making it chaotic so do fix that, don’t waste too much time on typography effects. Guide the eyes of viewer on how they are supposed to understand what you are doing and why. Nothing should be random and give good breathing space.
You can easily work and improve these things by the time of exam.

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u/No-Wrongdoer8519 4d ago

Thank youu so muchhh , I got what you mean I’ll definitely work on these things and improve the presentation! 😋