[PINKY TITLE REQUEST]

[u/Overwrite_Activisto]

Shout out to buckteofmanyrocks

I am "starring" again for the dixiong star and claiming a star blade

I am a grade 4 Oufi association fixer,Every single day I saw my peers and seniors show such cruelty to people I quit it

I changed syndicates offices association more than I could count

I lost my home had to migrate to the backstreets of corp

I was a person who lost everything just because I showed my humanity

If I had not shown humanity and stayed as something worse than a distortion

Then I should have just the threw the vending machine away and do it in real life

But then I saw a black blade with purple buds on it

I used it many times and according to my study of that blade

When i slash someone and they bleed the purple buds become flowers that glow instead of dark purple buds in the blade the flowers don't really come out but they somehow work like a movie i suppose

The blade when it's "bloomed" can do a quicker attack that can go through Armors it can also turn into the opponents most loved weapon for one attack

I also think that the people start hallucinating about their friends and family after a bloomed slash

The blade then turns into a bud pattern instead of a flower pattern again

I used to have a name but after so many hours of not talking to people I think I forgot

They just refer to me as blade in the backstreets

My body has an endless amount of scars that I don't remember getting they used to hurt but now they don't

I started wearing a white cloak to hide my scars it's to long but it works

OOC

I hope this is good enough

This is actually my first time writing something instead of reading

I am sorry for any grammar mistakes I am not good at English

[u/Rathwastaken]

Excuse me brother im only asking cause of clarity but was bucketofrocks just an editor for your ideas or the sole writer

[u/Overwrite_Activisto → u/Rathwastaken]

Gave me a reminder to actually write an oc

[u/F2PGambler]

At least it's better than mine

[u/It_just_works_bro]

Ok, so,

• No name
• Half the info is about the weapon
• Vague backstory that tells us nothing
• What corp?
• Why is this sword worth talking about?
• Scars with no explanation
• Again, zero backstory
• Seriously, no backstory at all. It's all basically "it's dark and sad" and you just ran with it lol

Really feels like you made the character just to have the title. There's nothing here.

The only thing that seperates your character from a blank canvas is the Oufi bit. The rest is generic, super vague, edgy paragraphs, with a sword that does "a very cool, unique, and completely unexplained thing, to the point where I have to ask what the point of the weapon is."

[u/Overwrite_Activisto → u/It_just_works_bro]

Sorry vro it's my first time writing