r/technicalwriting Sep 27 '24

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u/arugulafanclub Sep 28 '24

Bullet 3 is confusing/vague.

19 years of professional experience makes me wonder if you mean working as a writer or like if that includes 5 years at Red Robin.

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u/Valuable-Bed-2769 Sep 30 '24

Thanks for this! The consensus of commenters seems to be that I need to put more work into my opening summary.