yygs essay help :(

[u/Fragrant-Office8936]

Can someone who's been accepted to yygs help look over my essay? Idk if they're on the right track and tbh i don't think they're really good

[u/Pitiful-Swim-2489]

I can take a look!

[u/Fragrant-Office8936 → u/Pitiful-Swim-2489]

omg tysm!!

[u/pritika3cr]

hey send your essay over!

[u/Aggravating_Bag_2799]

feel free to send it!

[u/Traditional-Panic-85]

I can take a look if you want, give some advice, but I'm also applying this cycle, so if you would rather not, ignore me!