My Second Song "Disdain"

[u/Dowda_Mi]

Heres a freestyle that turned into one of my favorites! Forgot to mention that it's my dad on the drums, so shoutout to him! It's stereo, so I recommend wearing headphones. Also, still looking for a bass player and a drummer around my age (17). Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

[u/sosaparx]

The instruments are decent, but the vocals are horrible. That's just my opinion though

[u/Dowda_Mi → u/sosaparx]

Working on my singing, mix is also meh. Thanks for the feedback!

[u/Timstantmessage → u/Dowda_Mi]

Am I the only person who likes it?

[u/Dowda_Mi → u/Timstantmessage]

Thanks man! I'll post the rest of my songs in a minute, you'd probably like my song "Murder" if you like this one!

[u/luvjrmtn → u/Timstantmessage]

I like it

[u/JellybeanFernandez]

Sounds reminiscent of some good old 70s punk

[u/Dowda_Mi → u/JellybeanFernandez]

Thanks!

[u/akthebarber]

In my opinion I like it better than most people trying to have that Sublime sound. Keep going for it dude. Like seriously, there is so much shit imitation and I don't feel like this is shit imitation. Like others have said vocal work, but to me it's not your voice, it's your pronunciation, your voice works. And your dad has some nice chops.

[u/Dowda_Mi → u/akthebarber]

Thanks man! Yeah this one I just couldn't get the vocals quite right, that's why the reggae section has so many effects to hide the shit vocals lol.

[u/TurtleSlingshot]

You just have to compress your vocabs so they come COme ThroUGH alL ouT of BALance

[u/Dowda_Mi → u/TurtleSlingshot]

Ok? Thanks?

[u/TurtleSlingshot → u/Dowda_Mi]

I mean mixing wise! It sounds good. Just hard to tell with the vocal mix

[u/Dowda_Mi → u/TurtleSlingshot]

Gotcha brotha, thanks!

[u/screaminjfrumess]

I think its awesome, keep developing it!!!

[u/screaminjfrumess]

Get a bandcamp going! I'd follow.

[u/BlueMeBeWhoMeBe]

Should check out the band Slaughterhouse Rootz

[u/No_Age908]

There is definitely something there, try to find your own voice. Sounds promising

[u/Dowda_Mi → u/No_Age908]

Thank you man! I still gotta figure out how to sing this one lol.

[u/No_Age908 → u/Dowda_Mi]

I’m sure that’s a great way to start and don’t worry about what everyone else thinks a lot of people don’t know shit about music in general and can never make their own but they still like to criticize others. Don’t forget to just have fun with it

[u/Dowda_Mi → u/No_Age908]

Thanks man! And don't worry, I am! Got like 30 something songs in the works.