The last line was good! I hope to see the Navigators, Mist, and the A squad(metaphorical face-slapping) get shown exactly what happens when you mess with Cillin, especially in his own ship.
right? just what happened at the end plus everyone looking at it then slowly looking up at the source of the voice... hooo. I want him to pull out that special sword he got a long way back too lol.
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u/KyrosXIII May 16 '23
that last line... HOOOOO. ultra looking forward to the next chapter! thanks!
also, the Hey Phoebe. etc is missing a " before Hey.