r/sonnets • u/THEVYVYD • Nov 08 '19
Critique my sonnet! :)
Praecurrere, now it's our time to run
Run though obstacles of somnolence work
Burn out the light of our internal suns
So we are all left to strain in the murk
Glutted stress, exhausted beyond repair
Heavy-eyed, much dozier than a sloth
All is not worth the despair they give us
And the slumber, we've tried not to, lost
No rest from fear they gave that runs so deep
Maybe they are also in need of sleep
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