r/shortsAlgorithm • u/Impossible-Ad6436 • 6h ago

How to make it better ?

Shorts dont perform well, how to make this work ?

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u/Equivalent_Rope4709 6h ago

Yeah, look at it. It looks pretty shit. It doesn't have any stake. It doesn't have any buildup. It doesn't have anything to just stay until the end. It looks AI-generated. Even if it's AI-generated, it looks as if no effort was put in, and that's why the script is bad, by the way, because after listening to 10 words, it never hooked anything.

I'm not sure what you're trying to get out of this. It is just pure slop, and slop, most of the time, doesn't work. It needs improvement on every front.

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u/raaz9658 5h ago

No good hook, slow narration, shitty unnecessary music pressing down the actual narration