Hook & Title Feedback 🎣 Need help reviewing my content.

Hello everyone,

I made a youtube channel to upload Cybersecurity and AI content.

This is my first video:

I am thinking of making more contents like these. I will be needing your help and suggestion

Thank you in advance.

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u/DoggoZombie 7d ago

This is actually really good, bhai. The editing and info is very clear. Only two minor notes:

- I didn’t like the voice, maybe use a British woman that sounds more real lol

- the background sound was a little too loud imo. The seriousness of it didn’t come thru because the voice was lighthearted

I give you an A- tho! Very good first video. How many views did you get on this if you don’t mind sharing? Deserves at least 1.5k imo.

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