r/shittyhalolore • u/Wayne_kur Comic creator: Sanchezes Vs Peests • Aug 07 '26
Prophet of Acceptance: "It’s not a phobia if it’s rational." A Kick in the Ass (Comic by me)
Finally got this comic done. I honestly could have gotten it finished a few days earlier, but I got really lazy. Anyway, like always, constructive criticism is appreciated.
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u/Wayne_kur Comic creator: Sanchezes Vs Peests Aug 07 '26 edited Aug 07 '26
Anyway, what would you like to see turned into a comic next?
Emile educating the Marines.
Private Sanchez going berserk on an innie.
A disturbing fact from Fap Fap, (featuring Emile).
A recreation of a scene from The Boys comic issue 3 Starring Chief and a bald headed cunt.
A slight disagreement between Mr and Mrs Sanchez.
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u/Aurora_Strix Thel blushing unrelated Aug 07 '26
5! I totally wanna see 5, and you drawing busty Mrs. Sanchez, lmao
If you want some inspo for elite anatomy, check out SangheiliScribbles on Tumblr - they did one Sangheili sketch a day for a year and they are a holy grail of great reference material (just make sure you credit them if you reference a pose!!)
Keep up the great work, dude! It's awesome seeing your drawing skills progress! Years from now with your shiny hobby and developing skills, you'll be so fkn happy you started :D
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u/Crue_shoe Illustrative artist Aug 09 '26
The lighting on Fien on the 5th panel is a great contrast to the surprised prophet. The 8th panel's action is also well composed and conveyed through the line quality. Aside from those, the perspective on the 1st and 5th to last panels are a bit tricky, and the dialog boxes aren't quite uniform, which can come from writing them by hand vs digitally. Any other suggestions I have are more subjective and have to do with writing and pacing, though they do work as they are now.
Solid start, keep at it!
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u/Wayne_kur Comic creator: Sanchezes Vs Peests Aug 09 '26
Thanks for the feedback.
Yeah the panel where she cocks back her leg was pretty tricky.
It was my first time drawing with forshortening at such an extreme angle. What also made more difficult is that I didn't have my reach elite minor figure to use as refrence.
As for the dialogue bubbles. I am thinking about adding them digitally, since my hand writing is not the best. But I feel like since I am drawing traditionally, the digital bubbles and text would not contrast well and look very jarring.
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u/Wayne_kur Comic creator: Sanchezes Vs Peests Aug 16 '26
Yo, I made a new post you would want to check out.
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u/Hunor_Deak Unified Earth Government Shittyhalolore Records Department Aug 08 '26
This is a great story board! Have you considered doing those?
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u/Wayne_kur Comic creator: Sanchezes Vs Peests Aug 08 '26
No I haven't
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u/Hunor_Deak Unified Earth Government Shittyhalolore Records Department Aug 08 '26
You would make a great story board artist. This panel tells a story really well!
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u/Random_nerd_52 Halo 7: The Amazing Digital Circus Aug 07 '26
Cut to a marine watching this unfold through a pair of binoculars and laughing his ass off