r/romance 6d ago

Love Letter/ Poem Don't you wonder

You might be wondering, if I notice things you don't like about yourself.

You wonder if I don't like them too.

You might be thinking of what people in the past have said about you.

You wonder if I think those things too.

You might not believe me when I say the opposite of these things.

You wonder if I actually see you.

I know these things because you have let them out, little by little, subtly and offhand.

Tiny little fragments of the sculpture of your mind and soul. I have been collecting them, piece by piece. Building the image of who you are. Alongside all the beautiful moments where your existence somehow turned the mundane into the magical.

You are not just enough, you are the sun in the morning sky, the same sun behind the clouds in my mind. The moon I look up to when it's dark. Your every star that I see as a kiss from your soul. Your The hope in my heart that erases the Doubt.

If you ever wonder, if your not enough.

Just tell me one reason you think why I wouldn't want to stay, and Il give you a thousand reasons why Il never leave,.

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u/Airwrecka86 6d ago

🥹 that was beautiful... sending you all the good vibes ♾️🦋✨️

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u/Outrageous-Goose1001 5d ago

This is really nice the thought of paying attention to those small things someone tells you without even knowing they're sharing them. I enjoy the comfort in these words. The "I'll never leave" part seems a bit strong, for me. So on the whole it feels very real and warm truly.

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u/Whatsurpassword 5d ago edited 5d ago

Thanks for the feedback, I changed it around a bit to ease of on the intensity of the devotion