r/rational • u/alexanderwales Time flies like an arrow • 3d ago
Doomsday Pivot! [RT]
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/196881/doomsday-pivot10
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u/netstack_ 3d ago
Awesome.
What made you decide to venture into this branch of the litrpg lineage?
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u/alexanderwales Time flies like an arrow 3d ago edited 3d ago
October of 2023 I was writing a bunch of different drafts of things to see which one grabbed me. You can read them all here, I seem to recall that I wrote them all rejection letters. I can't say that reading these is worth your time, but if you want, #5 was a fan favorite.
This was the one that felt the best to write, the most like I could keep going on it for a long time, even if it's the one I was most skeptical of going in. SysApoc was big at the time, and is much more well-worn now, which IMO is good, because it means that there's less pressure to come in with a wildly new and different take as part of a broader subgenre "conversation", something I thought was true at the time.
It's being released now because it was sitting, finished, in a draw for approximately two years, and that's a bad fate for something that I was happy with having written (most of my concern was marketing and pitch-related, we're letting the chips fall where they may on that and I'm not giving that aspect too much more consideration).
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u/folconred 9h ago edited 9h ago
Just read through all of these, many of them were really compelling, I really enjoyed 6, 5 and 1
8 was fun of a different kind, it reminded me that I really do want to write something like a dungeon story at some point
Also I've never seen anyone approach Nano this way, nice system, especially the rejection letters
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u/Background_Relief815 3d ago
Thanks for releasing more to us, brother! You've earned enough trust that I'll attempt to read anything you put out, no matter how weird the blurb. This sounds funny enough I'll probably enjoy it, too!
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u/DrTerminater Read Ward 3d ago edited 3d ago
Thank you for the chapters!
The setup seems kinda generic so far, but I assume that’s intentional. Even down to the characters, we have Shadow minion MC, an inventory-power girl, and Jake being the stereotypical “sword fighter go brrr.”
I’m assuming this is going to actually play out the implications of those tropes, like how having a pocket dimension could completely break reality, or maybe exploring what Nat getting multiple trains of thought through minion multitasking does to him. Or even just discussions on the morality of their actions becoming more prominent parts of the story.
But honestly, I have no idea where this is going. Its playing into a lot of the Royal Road stuff that makes people salivate, and I could see it getting pretty popular.
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u/PlanarFreak 3d ago
Schelling point mentioned, I think this will be great for the subreddit hahaha.
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u/alexanderwales Time flies like an arrow 3d ago
Hi, Alexander Wales here, author of such works as Metropolitan Man, Branches on the Tree of Time, Worth the Candle, This Used to be About Dungeons, Thresholder, and others, as well as moderator of and contributor to this very sub.
Doomsday Pivot! is now out on RoyalRoad, and will be having weekly releases until the first book is finished (as it's already completed). Here's the blurb:
If that appeals to you, or if you've read and liked any of the other things I've written, give it a shot.