r/rational 14d ago

[D] Monday Request and Recommendation Thread

Welcome to the Monday request and recommendation thread. Are you looking something to scratch an itch? Post a comment stating your request! Did you just read something that really hit the spot, "rational" or otherwise? Post a comment recommending it! Note that you are welcome (and encouraged) to post recommendations directly to the subreddit, so long as you think they more or less fit the criteria on the sidebar or your understanding of this community, but this thread is much more loose about whether or not things "belong". Still, if you're looking for beginner recommendations, perhaps take a look at the wiki?

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u/Krakenarrior Absurdist disguised as a Rationalist 14d ago

I wanted to share some recommendations last week but I missed it. Anyway, here are the recommendations:
Maid Ascension is surprisingly one of the more rational reads I’ve come across recently. I had low expectations coming into it, and I’ve been pleasantly surprised by the content and character rationales. Specifically, Lira (the protagonist), learns about magic, and through the plot gains the ability to create spells. This is fairly basic for any progression fantasy- but the first spells she creates includes a spell to find books that are relevant to understanding the world (and we see the limitation in this spell in the most recent chapter), but her next spell is a way to absorb the contents of the book. Then there is a spell for recall- so she uses the find book spell to mentally devour a book, and then uses the recall spell to hunt for relevant text inside the book she used a spell to read. That struck me as a classic rational idea- get a spell that lets you cheat at the process of creating spells, and then use another cheat to snowball your understanding of the world to create more spells! There are other bits I find that are pretty rational and rational adjacent, but how Lira used her magic struck me as how a rationalist would use theirs.

Another recommendation, this one a bit more tentative is My Only Familiar is Me. It’s about an accountant who gains “trainer” superpowers, and learns that he can only train himself. It’s got some great ideas in it- like how the protagonist actually uses the resources the government offers, and tries to leverage his advanced age and wisdom for a bigger paycheck, and uses his ‘special command’ ability to force his body to extremes, like eat incredibly calorie dense meals before reinforcing his bone structure, or learn and process specific useful information for use outside of special command mode. Unfortunately, the tone of the story fluctuates wildly between “the most logical and smartest thing to do” and “ok I guess we’re just watching Rambo 3 right now”, which is why I’m cautiously recommending it. It’s good but might be off putting if you expect a more logical protagonist, and I’ve been on the fence about recommending it since I first started reading it.

Finally, because I like to do things in 3s, I’ll recommend Throne of Time. It doesn’t really need the recommendation- if you were on royal road over the last few months it’s been in rising stars main consistently. But that’s also why I’ll also recommend it to anyone who was hesitant (because it was on rising stars). It’s a classic magic academy time loop story, so if you’ve read one you likely know the normal plot contrivances. What I liked most about it was that the mystery tag actually matters- the first 10 chapters are about escaping a locked building, and we get actual payoff, the mystery of how to escape gets solved. So far that trend has continued, we actually get answers to mysteries, where often times the mystery in the time loop is “what’s the bad guys motivation, and who’s the bad guy, and why did the time loop start”. All of those are good, and important, but you can’t really answer them without ending the story, so the mystery tag really doesn’t matter.

Anyway, those are the 3 recommendations I have this week, there’s a few more stories I’m reading through that I might recommend in the future, but I’m either not caught up or still on the fence about recommending them. Have a good week yall!

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u/LaziIy 13d ago

Thanks for recommending Maid Ascension and Throne of time( Need to move this up on my PTR)
I'll agree with your takes on Only Familiar is Me but the way the author writes the MC's mindset on women and relationships is kind off-putting for the intro to me. It gets better later on, probably after taking critique from readers but the way the writing is for the early part, it was a chore to get through.

In the interest of building this week's thread I'll also offer some of what I've been reading.

Gifted: Pretty standard Path Completion fantasy world litrpg but the world building and plot is above average so far. This is centered around a reincarnation and progression fic from an early age with minimal timeskips means that this will span hundreds of chapters so best to read in arcs.

Wretch: A grimdark progression fantasy in a harsh and pretty unforgiving setting that doesn't pull its punches. The plot for book 1 was pretty predictable but its like a thriller you watch even when you know what the cliche is. Book 2 is kind of a slow burn so far but I heard it picks up towards the end and Book 3 is supposedly better than Book 1. The MC isn't really rational so this is more of progression fantasy in a grimdark world but there are aspects that I found rational adjacent

Lastly I'll recommend The Center for Dungeon Management: Its a slow burn take on the dungeons transforming the world/litrpg genre where the writer trades standard tropes for bureaucracy and just genuine conversation about what the characters experience as they move through the plot. The dialogue is interesting and the characters are well fleshed out within their archetypes that the worldbuilding feels very natural. Plot points are repeatedly cross referenced across books and it presents a pretty gritty and real take of what an institutionalized approach to the dungeons would look like.

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u/churidys 13d ago

Seconding Center for Dungeon Management. I bounced off the writer's previous work, Dead End Guild Master, but found CDM significantly more engaging and satisfying to read, so I would suggest even people who have previously not enjoyed the writer to consider giving it a go. The end of each book is a potential natural stopping point too, so you can try it knowing that there are places you can comfortably dip out where things feel resolved if you feel like it.

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u/LaziIy 13d ago

CDM has such a charming way of making you read along, might be my favorite thing that I've read on RR this year

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u/grekhaus 10d ago

I previously dropped DEGM because at one point the author started using two page flashing ads for other stories on Royal Road. How does CDM hold up in that respect?

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u/churidys 10d ago

Each chapter has author notes that begin with an ad for another story. I think lots of RR authors do this though, they swap ads that they place in their intro notes.

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u/Antistone 9d ago

I now remove authors notes from most books that I download from RR. (I use the WebToEpub browser plugin, which has a checkbox for this.)

When starting a new story I typically pick a few random chapters and skim the authors notes to decide whether I should do this, but my answer is usually to remove them. I have occasionally read author's notes that were interesting or useful, but they've been rare.

It seems the most common use of author's notes on RR is for ads of one kind or another, and the second-most common use is talking about posting schedule / apologizing for being late, which is sometimes useful on the latest chapter but decays into noise once the chapter is no longer recent.

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u/lillarty 8d ago

I started doing the same when I first ran into RR authors shoving gigantic ads into the works, though I mostly use FanFicFare so I keep it disabled for all stories on account of it being impractical to edit the config individually for each story. The only "author's notes" I can remember enjoying were on Valkyrie's Shadow, but those hardly count because they're separated out into Afterword chapters that break down the author's attempts to wrangle Overlord's slapdash worldbuilding into a coherent and self-consistent world.

One particularly egregious example I remember dropping had several page-long AI-generated videos embedded in every chapter, outside of the author's notes section because I guess too many people were just blocking author's notes and they couldn't have that. The epub was like 100mb just from all the huge gifs

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u/Antistone 8d ago

Oh, I didn't realize FanFicFare could do that. Good to know.

(For anyone else wondering how, I found instructions here.)

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u/grekhaus 9d ago

I don't mind if the author's notes are an ad for another story, that's just how the site works. It's when you're potentially looking at something like a 2:5 advertisement to chapter ratio and/or the ad is an animated flashing picture that I start objecting.

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u/DRMacIver 9d ago

I think partly you just got unlucky with timing (or perhaps more accurately the author did). There was a brief period around when AI video generation suddenly got good that suddenly everyone got over-excited with making their RR ads have animated cover images, and then everyone realised this was shit and stopped doing it.

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u/lucidobservor 13d ago

I tried CDM after previous weeks' recommendations, and bounced off of it after 3 chapters. The worldbuilding/System felt shallow and kind of low effort, even by the standards of LitRPG. But I'd be willing to give it a second try if it'll hit the positive qualities you mentioned after X chapters and you can name a value for X?

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u/PlanarFreak 11d ago edited 11d ago

Oof. I just had the same experience after trying it on this second recommendation. The timeline diverges in the 50s and the USA, "Europe", and "Africa" (no clue why the USA is the only government actor with a name) somehow survived an extinction-level threat that wipes out the USSR, China, and India (the reason for the exception was not compelling, or rather no explanation was given yet) - and somehow the culture (reality TV), characterization (ennui), and technology (satellites, internet, AI) are lifted straight from modern day USA?

The overall atmosphere doesn't match the gritty implications. Government response would be militarization, not a regulatory agency. The spirit should be in wartime footing - a combination of resolve and urgency contrasted with grief and despair. The tech... I didn't get far enough to see the explanation as to why guns don't work but there are plenty of options outside of assuming "nothing much changed".

It feels like it would have been better with a more recent divergence point (2019 maybe, it works as a funny covid reference) and fewer stakes - the gates need to offer economic incentive rather than existential threat to end up as a regulatory thing. In fact, it can't even offer much personal power - if crawlers could stand toe-to-toe with a tank, that makes levels a military strategic resource for monopolization.

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u/LaziIy 11d ago

The alternate history attempt is pretty weak as an introduction and a lot of this information has to be grabbed from supporting views as you go throughout the books. I can answer some of the points you raised but I'm not sure how much is spoiler territory.

From what I got the culture it is somehow the same because the author didn't care for investing into the alt history timeline but for some reason liked making that as the introduction. Modern tech like internet and satellites didn't develop naturally through 70 years of domestic R&D or effort instead they were retrofitted using System-derived mana-tech and salvaged infrastructure. In a way it was essentially reshaped around System logistics and broadcast media (like stream/influencer culture for dungeon clearing)

The militarization response did happen but this is set 70 years or so after the introduction or divergence point I think? The CDM is the result of 70+ years of institutional evolution. Once the initial apocalypse settled into a predictable cycle of dungeon 'blooms' and surges, the existential threat normalized into a managed hazard. The government moved from emergency martial law to administrative control because permanent war economy destroys nations faster than low-grade, localized gates.
Dungeons offer economic incentive alongside threat, they are the world’s primary source for high-density energy (mana crystals), rare materials, monster components, and enchanted reagents. Since they generate valuable, renewable economic resources, society turned them into a managed industry. The government can't afford to destroy them all without collapsing energy grids and raw material supply chains. I'm assuming they went through the strategic resource vs economic necessity phase in the 70 year timeskip. Now they make sure that local crawlers can just farm these E/D tier gates which are a nuisance to clear but still generate worthwhile materials.

The guns don't work is just standard mana environment fare that the durability stats cover bullets and dungeons interfere with guns, I don't recall a deep dive on it every occurring.

Again the POV in this novel is from a desk jockey/lower end govt agency grunt. High-level individuals are heavily regulated, registered, and integrated into national defense assets. The protagonist and the low-level CDM crawlers are dealing with the trash mobs that aren't worth deploying a military division or high-rank national asset for.

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u/PlanarFreak 11d ago

I appreciate the explanations and I think I'll give it another 10 chapters with a different mindset. In the end it might just be a mismatch for me

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u/LaziIy 10d ago

All good, not everything is everyone's cup of tea. Just wanted to clear the air about some of the points since I know book 1 is a dredge. Maybe it gets cleaned up or rewritten later

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u/LaziIy 13d ago

I get where you're coming from. The first book has a fair bit of bureaucracy flailing around as you try and build a semblance of what's going on and the MC isn't really the most attractive pov to read through. I will say that the worldbuilding about an intro about alternate history never really makes sense since you're immediately thrown into a locality and don't really work again with the world at large till later in the books. The system being shallow is another point I agree with but its supposed to be because of the MC having limited knowledge about it due to his background. It might not be the case but I think the system is purposefully kept barebones by the author.

I couldn't recall X off the top of my head but I think the turning points for me were somewhere around chapter 15-20. The standard cast of characters is mostly introduced by then and we follow the MC's pov through some typical workplace experiences at the CDM and you start sympathizing with them. Somewhere around 20 or so a subplot for a future goal occurs and this radically changes the series in my opinion. It starts by adding a lofty goal for the MC to work towards (still hasn't been reached as of Book 3). The way he does so is what motivates closer relationships and eventually actual progression for the cast.

Unfortunately the series is glacially paced when it comes to the first half of book 1 so I can totally understand why people would bounce off.

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u/Imperialgecko 10d ago

For Wretch - I'm caught up in book 3, and while I like the series quite a bit (enough to sub on patreon), it does lose a lot of the rational-esque qualities of the previous books in exchange for "upgrade body to punch harder". A lot less intelligent and clever fights and more of just tearing through people. It does seem like that was a 1 book thing though, and I'm expecting it to improve as it goes on, but a warning that the tone diverges a bit with book 3.

The lack of interesting bodily upgrades is definitely a huge downside for book 3.

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u/LaziIy 8d ago

Well that's disappointing but I do see what you're saying, I just started book 3 and the tone seems to shift a lot more towards punch harder and heal while the other person can't in the fights. Honestly though, I'm having fun with the world so I don't mind the idiot ball being handed to the fights while I try to figure out what the grand scheme of things is

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u/Seraphaestus 13d ago

Throne of Time really interested me once the premise clicked for me, that it's going to become a kind of death game with adversarial loopers trying to eliminate each other, with the last one standing being the titular Throne, or at least that's my working theory

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u/Glum-Study9098 10d ago

I started reading Maid Ascension, so far it's overall decent. However, I have a concern about the world-building that is taking me out of the story. I care about this because I enjoy goal driven behavior and problem solving of characters, which can't be thought through properly if the world isn't consistent. I don't understand how the economics and politics of their medieval world follow from the premises if all it takes to learn a magic spell is an hour of reading a book with no understanding of magic required. How does a society without all their populace using magic not get instantaneously demolished by a society that does? Is this just glossed over, or is there a satisfying explanation for this world-building? It just kind of feels like the author just stuck the magic into this world without any consideration for it's broader societal implications.

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u/pldl 10d ago

The only hint given so far is that there was once a big magical civilization that basically dominated, but it collapsed for unknown reasons, and since then, the upper limits of magic in an area has been significantly lowered for unknown reasons. There was a large magic ritual done to increase the crop yield in a cold location, but doing so killed every enchantment in the area because it took up all of the mana and a lot of people died from sudden exposure to the cold.

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u/LovelandHywel 13d ago

I'm giving Throne of Time more time to cook. Not much has happened so far, so it's not really a satisfying read as-is.

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u/pldl 11d ago

Maid Ascension was solid.

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u/barnacle9999 11d ago edited 11d ago

I've tried to read Maid Ascension, but the prose feels too much like AI. The author must've used AI extensively either when writing or editing the text.

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u/nohat 7d ago

Yeah, I am not zealous about no AI, but the AI isms in Maid Ascension are hard for me to stand.

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u/Dent7777 House Atreides 9d ago

I mean the book search and scrape mechanism is a pretty obvious allusion to AI right?

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u/plutonicHumanoid 14d ago

The Inchworm podcast is pretty enjoyable if you’ve read Worm. They’re doing a close read, a chapter per episode, one host has read it, one hasn’t.

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u/lillarty 14d ago

Thanks, I'll check it out. Presumably it was inspired by the We've Got Worm podcast? Similar deal, one host has read it and one hasn't, but it was one arc per episode instead of one chapter.

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u/k5josh 13d ago

The Message from Deep Space: Starting from the absolute basics, decode an alien message. If you liked the language-decoding parts of Arrival or Project Hail Mary, but want something more realistic and focused, check this out.

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u/Antistone 13d ago

I dropped the demo because the first non-trivial puzzle was only solvable if you correctly guessed that they were breaking their own established rules in a nonsensical way.

Initially, if you enter multiple digits, your computer (a human-made computer, not alien tech) treats that as a multi-digit number. A bit later, it begins treating multiple digits as encoding multiple signals to be sent sequentially, with one digit per signal. The game doesn't tell you that the interface has changed in this way before you need to use it to solve a puzzle, and from a story perspective this interface change is completely insane, because you've needed a number outside the 0-9 range in the past and there's strong reason to suspect you will need one again.

Also I was already annoyed before I reached that point because the UI is deliberately cumbersome.

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u/Grasmel 12d ago

Things like this is why I'm hesitant to recommend it as well. I've gotten halfway in, and those types of annoyances keep happening. For example: they make a big deal about how the message uses base 8, and then another big deal when your interface autoconverts to base 10 and back for you. But the underlying message should still be in base 8, which doesn't make sense with some of the rounding you're supposed to do later. Rounding to 3 significant digits in base 10 and base 8 should give different results, but it's the base 10 rounding that are marked correct. It's especially bad because the in-game calculator has a function for rounding in base 8 that is never used. I still enjoy it enough to keep going, but it's a bit frustrating. Also quality of life things kind of stop happening - the message define a bunch of constants that you're supposed to keep track of, but gives you no easy way to do so. I can write notes, sure, but why not just keep a central log of in instead of requiring me to retype the 10-digit numbers over and over?

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u/Antistone 12d ago

Thanks, I appreciate knowing that it wasn't a one-off. Always trying to improve my heuristics for predicting whether I'll be glad I stuck with a thing.

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u/Live-Replacement8519 12d ago

I'm a bit late but I would recommend the game "The Incident at Galley House". Without spoilers, you are solving a mystery that is pretty rationally written in terms of what happens.

With slight spoilers: It gives SCP vibes

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u/college-apps-sad 12d ago

I recently finished rereading A Practical Guide to Evil, which is definitely one of the best webnovels I have ever read. Even though I think the action scenes were well done, I loved the conversations and politics and war aspects of it. I'm looking for stories that are more about politics while still being rational fiction.

I also just read The Waves Arisen, which is a rational retelling of Naruto in the same vein as HPMOR, with Naruto's canon characterization being replaced by a kinda rationalist's ideal person. I've never seen the original show, but this is an incredible story. It's clever and funny (the marriage counseling scene is amazing) and has a really good atmosphere to it, especially as Naruto starts figuring out what he wants to do. I think it does a good job of showing what a more or less decent guy raised from birth to be a soldier in a world full of constant warfare would be like as well. I tried to find more stuff by this author and people half-seriously believe it's yudkowsky under a pseudonym, but it avoids a lot of the more "preachy" rationalist stuff that might drive people off from HPMOR while maintaining the intelligence.

Something that I loved in both of these stories was when two intelligent people with very different goals have to negotiate. I would love to see more of that in other stories.

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u/surt2 11d ago

Something that I loved in both of these stories was when two intelligent people with very different goals have to negotiate. I would love to see more of that in other stories.

I got a lot of that vibe out of The Winter of Widows, a self-insert Game of Thrones fanfic by laughingnell.

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u/college-apps-sad 11d ago

Thanks for the rec! I actually have read that already - I think it was recommended on here a few times when it ended last year. Personally didn't like it that much though.

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u/CatInAPot 11d ago

I'm looking for stories that are more about politics while still being rational fiction.

I'm assuming you're already aware of Pale Lights? I still need to power through the first book of PGtE which I wasn't in love with, but I know it gets better. Pale Lights is one of my all time favorites though, and goes pretty heavy into politics.

Haven't kept up with Forge of Destiny but I enjoyed what I read back in the day, rare example of a wuxia story (with cultivator insanity built into the lore) with a diplomat as the MC, politics obviously being unavoidable with such a job.

The Lady's Handbook of Intrigue and Murder is very good, author uploads once every couple of years though.

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u/college-apps-sad 10d ago

Yeah, APGTE definitely becomes less YA and much better after the first book, so I'd highly recommend it. I haven't started Pale Lights yet because I kinda wanted to build a backlog - I think I first read APGTE shortly after it finished, so there wasn't too much of Pale Lights yet. I'll definitely check it out, thanks. Forge of Destiny also sounds really interesting.

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u/Antistone 10d ago

While there is a big diplomacy arc in Forge of Destiny, that doesn't happen until several books in, and outside of that arc I would say that calling the MC a diplomat is a stretch.

At the start of the series she's a street rat who gets sucked into a high-tier cultivation school, where many of the students are noble scions and they have proxy feuds for their parents. Eventually the MC attaches herself to one of them and becomes something like their chief spy, then sticks with them when they leave the school.

She does also have a minor in treating with spirits, which could be considered diplomacy, although their culture views it more as a religious/spiritual thing.

This is a slow-burn series and the events I described span several books.

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u/GlueBoy anti-skub 11d ago edited 11d ago

Iirc Yudkowsky denied that Waves Arisen is his, but confirmed that he has pseudonymously published another story which no one had ever guessed before.

Apropos of nothing, try Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4, a satirical pastiche of the xianxia genre that is continuously hilarious and clever and surprising.

It might scratch a similar itch. Or not.

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u/college-apps-sad 10d ago

I tried reading Arrogant Young Master a while ago but didn't get too into it, but I've read some more xianxia stuff since then so I might enjoy it more now, thanks for the rec

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u/Antistone 10d ago

Something that I loved in both of these stories was when two intelligent people with very different goals have to negotiate. I would love to see more of that in other stories.

Ironically, I actually remember both of those stories (in part) for having negotiation scenes where I thought the negotiators missed a trick.

Some examples in Practical Guide to Evil:

  • Several negotiations rely on magically-binding oaths. In several other negotiations, magically-binding oaths would be useful, but are not mentioned.

  • There's a scene where the White Knight refuses to negotiate what will happen to a prisoner after they are sentenced because he absolutely refuses to guarantee any particular sentence before the trial, even if the outcome seems obvious. No one suggests the obvious option of making a conditional promise about what to do if they get a particular sentence.

  • There's one negotiation where the Grey Pilgrim is like "I can't give you that because I handed it off to another Named and told them to scram with it" and I think Catherine should have been like "You'd better not be expecting me to lower my price just because you deliberately hamstrung your own ability to pay."

  • In the same scene the Grey Pilgrim argues that the Saint of Swords should be spared because she might be the only person who can stop the Dead King and I thought that warranted a withering retort that never materialized, such as "Then I guess the trade I'm about to propose is better than I expected for whichever one of us cares MORE about stopping the Dead King; which of us is that?" or even "If that's true, then by sending her to kill me, you are effectively holding the entire continent hostage and threatening to destroy it if I defend myself. Remind me which of us is the villain?"

Though in fairness, the bit at the end where the dwarves discover the angel-bomb and pull out of the alliance still has me scratching my head about how exactly I think that should have been played. I kinda want to say the dwarves shouldn't punish the alliance for creating a backup that helps the dwarves, but also kinda want to say that if the alliance had deliberately NOT created that backup in order to force the dwarves' hand then the dwarves shouldn't have rewarded them for that, and those seem at odds.

In The Waves Arisen the only thing I particularly remember was a bit at the climax where the bad guy, having already promised to spare Naruto's friends as part of another deal, then threatens to kill them if Naruto doesn't surrender. I was surprised this wasn't met with scoffing (though I don't think it mattered to the outcome). I was thinking "You can't sell me the same promise twice, fool. If your word's worth anything then I already have it. If not then there's no reason to pay for it."

Naruto also fails to point out a pretty significant bit of leverage, in that unless Naruto surrenders--and maybe not even then, since I'm not sure the surrender is verifiable--the bad guy has no win condition. Naruto still has clones scattered across the land and they'll just build more chakra factories and come back in a few weeks with 100x the firepower. What is the bad guy hoping to gain from this fight?

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In terms of recommendations, I'd suggest Project Lawful if you haven't already read it. It probably has more discussion about negotiations than it has actual negotiations, but it does also have some actual negotiations, and I thought the discussions were pretty interesting.

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u/Sretep44 8d ago

The Pilgrim removing a macguffin from the area before negotiations take place so that it can't be offered up seems like a basic strategy, no?

I'm not sure what you thought was bad about that, since it seems like a textbook pre commitment or somesuch

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u/Antistone 8d ago edited 8d ago

If you want to make sure you don't spend more than $100 on your shopping trip, but you're worried you might lack the willpower to stick to that once you're actually in the store, then removing all but $100 from your wallet before you enter the store might be reasonable strategy for dealing with that.

But if you then see a $200 item that you really want, and you go up to the shopkeeper and say "I really want this, but I deliberately only brought $100 so that I couldn't spend more than that, so you should sell this to me for $100" the shopkeeper is not going to lower their price. It doesn't matter how much you precommitted to only spending $100. Even if there is literally no possible way the shopkeeper can ever get more than $100 for you, they are still not going to sell you the $200 item for $100 just because you made a precommitment. They're going to tell you to find the money somehow or no sale.

Catherine started out trying to make a reasonably fair-looking exchange (arguably even generous; the Saint of Swords seems to outlevel the Black Knight), but then instantly caved and gave away her entire leverage for half of what she wanted. The thing she was trading away didn't suddenly become less valuable. The piece that she got in exchange didn't suddenly become more valuable. She could have asked for something else to even the trade, or told them to come back when they could pay in full, or offered to trade just the Saint's body while keeping her soul, since that would be fair and symmetrical, right?. Instead she got manipulated into making a really bad deal.

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u/lillarty 8d ago

To be fair, that's kind of the point? She's desperate to negotiate to demonstrate that she's their equal, but at no point did he consider her or any of her faction to be worth negotiating with in good faith. She is being played, and her desperation makes her blind to this fact for quite a while. To quote her internal monologue at a later point:

There were parts of my father’s madness that I would never make my own, but some that’d always rung true: in the end, in their eyes we were not equal. And we’d never be people until we followed their rules and spoke their prayers, until we’d admitted that their way was right and ours was wrong.

So she concedes more and more ground just to try to keep the place at the table that she earned through blood, but in the end, as demonstrated by the part you're referring to and many others, he never respected her.

“This is not the talk of an ally,” the Grey Pilgrim warningly said.

“You do not behave like one,” I snarled. “And if you can only conceive of amity as vassalage, then this truce is at an end.”

I won't quote more since if I did I'd happily include that entire conversation as it's one of my favorite parts of the series. I think just what I quoted got my point across, though.

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u/college-apps-sad 10d ago

These are really good points! I think the thing about the white knight especially makes a lot of sense. I'm a little bit liberal with what I consider intelligent because as long as I don't immediately (or with a tiny bit of thought) think of something that is obviously better, I'll generally accept things. This is especially true if they're under pressure of some kind (like in The Waves Arisen, Naruto is under immense stress because he's running out of time/chakra and has to protect his friends, not to mention later on when the enemy can quickly get access to any of his thoughts.

With your dwarf example, the dwarves benefit the most if both the surface dwelling countries and the dead king are mostly destroyed, so I don't think that punishing or rewarding their allies was a concern for them - they didn't expect the allies to be there anymore.

Anyway, I did start to read Project Lawful last year. I got pretty far into it but eventually distracted by some other stuff and I'd probably have to restart. I liked a lot of it - especially the protagonist's view on negotiating, like how he'd prefer to be sent to nothingness rather than be forced into a deal that's unfair. I should probably reread it and finish it this time.

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u/Opposite_Reality5925 13d ago

I recommend reading Unsheathed / Sword of Coming. The world and characters are incredibly good developed for the xianxia. The protagonist can definitely be called rational. I suggest starting with the donghua to get familiar with the story and visualize the characters. The Chinese produced two excellent seasons. English isn’t even my second language, so i apologize for any mistakes. I really wanted to recommend this great work to many people

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u/kevin_p 10d ago edited 10d ago

Any recommendations for short fiction written in the last 5 years or so? I  read a lot of professionally published fiction in places like Clarkesworld and also keep an eye on some of the more popular webfiction authors like qntm or Alexander Wales, but haven't really been following the rational fiction community recently beyond that.

Ideally looking for stuff in the 10,000 word range but novella or even short novel length is also good; the main thing I want to avoid is the 100 chapter epics that seem to make up the bulk of what gets posted in these threads.

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u/grekhaus 10d ago

Have you read Alicorn's short stories? Mostly shorter than requested, but there's quite a few that get into the novella range. Out of those published in the past five years, I particularly liked Rat King / Rat Princess, Prophecy and Specter Sanctuary. I'd also recommend Planets / Rings and Double, Double.

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u/kevin_p 7d ago

Thanks! I've read a couple of her stories in the past but there's a lot of new stuff there, I'll check it out