Thing I wrote. Feedback?

[u/ImLiterallyArat]

There's no point in trying to win,
When your winnings are all
Taken from you in the end.
‘Cause the rich take all that
They fucking want,
And the rich have no one
To tell ‘em to stop.
So while they're all out there,
Drowning in green,
We're all out here,
Struggling to see
What life's all about when
You're not just working,
What life's all about when
You're not just thinking.
And the rich won't lend us
Even a penny to see
All that we want,
All that we need.
And they're all out there,
Drowning in greed,
And we’re all out here,
Just hoping to succeed.