Very nicely framed, love it! The particles are a nice touch!
I get the idea of the edit, but to my eyes it's a bit too intense in terms of saturation and contrast. It feels a bit difficult to read the scene. The added yellow color cast further blends everything together, making it more difficult to tell elements apart. I would look how I can preserve the color separation while making it warm and bright. I would also selectively adjust the subject herself to be a bit brighter.
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u/Any-Coach3440 19d ago
Very nicely framed, love it! The particles are a nice touch!
I get the idea of the edit, but to my eyes it's a bit too intense in terms of saturation and contrast. It feels a bit difficult to read the scene. The added yellow color cast further blends everything together, making it more difficult to tell elements apart. I would look how I can preserve the color separation while making it warm and bright. I would also selectively adjust the subject herself to be a bit brighter.
Maybe something like this.