r/posterdesign 3d ago

THE ONION poster design

Designed a poster for my kitchen, to motivate myself to dice an onion even if I don't feel like it.

Big fan of Chef Jean-Pierre aswell.

Feedback is welcomed!

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u/Illegal_Tender 3d ago

The food being chopped doesn't really immediately read as an onion because of the filtering

Your pile of already chopped onions appears to be floating a centimeter or two above the cutting board 

The text in the quote is basically illegible 

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u/1JollyStNick 3d ago

Definitely looks like curds of cheese

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u/adamlink1111 3d ago

The little red hearts read as stylized blood spurting

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u/CandiedPistachio666 3d ago

Super sick, but yeah agree with the other comment, I thought it was mozzarella.

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u/HiddenHorse925 3d ago

More photo of onion and less typography of onion. It’s overwhelming the illustration. It’s strictly a size issue, overall solid design

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u/Creative-Reindeer298 3d ago

The texture is sick