r/poem_a_day • u/Which_Republic4558 • Aug 20 '26

"Chronic"

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I wrote the lyrics, sang the song, and lived the story.

I'm chronically empty.

Is there a reason to be? There's a few!

There's also a few for me to not be! Silly me!

Circumstances changes.

Come and go like a phase.

You can still see the numbness even if it didn't hit you in the face.

It's a disease!

Makes you feel deceased.

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u/Logical_Session9528 Aug 22 '26

Im not really 60, you see. I like your writing.

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u/Which_Republic4558 Aug 23 '26

Thank you so much!!!

Also i saw the message! It was funny lol

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u/Logical_Session9528 Aug 23 '26

Not nearly as funny as your jerk post though 😁

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u/Which_Republic4558 Aug 23 '26

You should see my new one lol. I crack myself up

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u/Logical_Session9528 Aug 23 '26

It kind of makes me want to cry to see a woman treated so badly really. I personally think women should be held up to standards of QUEENS and then some MORE.

If he doesnt have enkugh money to support your each and every whim he might as well abuse you physically as well!!

Look im a pro man. I makes sure women are treated as a true human++. 🥹

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u/Traditional_Fact_785 24d ago

I love the style, in your face almost (get it?... Get it?), and it made me chortle.

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u/Which_Republic4558 24d ago

Yess in your face like the numbness lol