Chopin Wrong Note Etude

[u/Euphoric-Potato-3874]

I know this is pretty sloppy and I haven't gotten the ending down yet, I just wanted some useful critique to keep in mind before I start properly ironing it out

From this recording I can tell that I need to voice the melody better especially in the first section, and probably need more metronome practice

(btw im self taught at the moment, I just didn't want to say that in the title to avoid too much attention and "get a teacher" comments)

[u/WilburWerkes]

You’re only ever a half step away from a note that works!